From 004bf44127b34b19e47efdd2d7ba3ab89edd3d86 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Kiri Date: Sat, 26 Aug 2023 22:01:21 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Sentence structure. Grammar. --- README.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 1cbc8f7..496aa0c 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -1,17 +1,17 @@ # Kiri's Wiring Bypass Kit Have you ever been stuck in Hell because you accidentally blew up a -switch to an important elevator? +switch to an important locked door? Couldn't leave the UAC HQ after giving your two weeks in the form of too much heavy ordnance, because you broke the elevator? -Can't make it through that broken teleporter the sweet, sweet freedom -of the end of the level? +Can't make it through that broken teleporter to the sweet, sweet +freedom of the end of the level? Well, have I got the solution for YOU! -## Kiri's Discount Wiring Bypass Kit +## Kiri's Discount Wiring Bypass Kit! Temporarily restore power to broken electronics (or creepy hellish teleporter alien magic things) with this handy dandy kit.